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Tuesday, September 1, 2015
Show rather than tell
He stared, not at the blood-red Dahlias staked tall
and heavy against the next cloudburst, or the iridescent hummingbird
flying guard over the the sugar-water feeder, or the giant swallowtail
butterflies fluttering like folded scraps of tissue in the hot humid
air. He stared, out the window, at the outside, and wondered if it was
real, then rolled his wheelchair back in front of the television to watch Jeopardy.
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