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Monday, January 26, 2015
Evening
Pacific Sunset
Through the evening haze,
The sun slipped
Behind a cloud
To change her dress.
I peeked beneath the horizon
And saw the ocean of creation,
Blue-green, sparkling with life,
Swirling, hungrily swallowing all she offered.
I joined the feast
And let her slip into me.
Warm, still, and then gone;
A rainbow of echoes.
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